group discussion

2009/1/8下午 08:21:17 candy so let's start
2009/1/8下午 08:21:33 Wendy how to write the review?
2009/1/8下午 08:22:06 vivi not how but what should we write
2009/1/8下午 08:22:25 Wendy the book is divided into three part
2009/1/8下午 08:22:55 Wendy maybe we can find each part's important point
2009/18 下午 08:23:07 Wendy to let us learn how to write
2009/1/8下午 08:23:35 candy could all of you tell me which chapter you presented before？
2009/1/8下午 08:24:04 vivi mine is 11
2009/1/8下午 08:24:18 vivi about description
2009/1/8下午 08:24:25 candy Sophia and I were in charge of the chapter "Writing about Film"
2009/1/8下午 08:24:27 vivi I report with Joyce
2009/1/8下午 08:24:51 Roxy Wendy and I had talked about the "writing in the world of work"
2009/1/8下午 08:25:38 candy i think maybe we can focus on the chapters that presented in class
2009/1/8下午 08:26:18 candy because we have already listened to the main points
2009/1/8下午 08:26:46 Roxy the main points of the book content?
2009/1/8下午 08:27:17 candy yes
2009/1/8下午 08:27:28 vivi In the charpter 11, the author gives us many way to describe things, such as simile metaphor personifaction and so on
2009/1/8下午 08:27:30 candy whatever you want
2009/1/8下午 08:28:45 vivi and the auther also give many example senrence to make us know easily
2009/1/8下午 08:30:31 Roxy As to writing of world of work, it provides writing skills of different business letter and memo
2009/1/8下午 08:31:30 Roxy in addition, there are examples of these written messages
2009/1/8下午 08:32:37 vivi what about candy's?
2009/1/8下午 08:34:13 candy as for my part
2009/1/8下午 08:35:31 candy it frist mentions the four kind s of essay using film found in composition
2009/1/8下午 08:35:58 candy and guidelines for writing about films
2009/1/8下午 08:36:37 candy like the steps before you begin to write about an movie essay
2009/1/8下午 08:37:37 vivi good job,candy. you tell us that in detail.
2009/1/8下午 08:37:53 vivi and then
2009/1/8下午 08:38:25 vivi we should talk about which part you like and why?
2009/1/8下午 08:38:41 candy i haven't finished yet
2009/1/8下午 08:39:12 candy it also remind readers the points to avoid
2009/1/8下午 08:39:25 vivi So sorry
2009/1/8下午 08:41:07 candy at the last part
2009/1/8下午 08:41:14 vivi you can go on
2009/1/8下午 08:42:20 Wendy Candy, have you finished yet?

Vivi 說 (下午 08:44):
OK
candy 說 (下午 08:44):
at the last part
candy 說 (下午 08:45):
it provides with a sample

Wendy 離開對話。

candy 說 (下午 08:46):
and in our group presentation
candy 說 (下午 08:47):
in order to make it interesting ,
candy 說 (下午 08:47):
we've add film clips
candy 說 (下午 08:47):
so... that's all
candy 說 (下午 08:47):
haha
Roxy 說 (下午 08:49):
ya I remember that you provide the clips which were also discussed in Jerome's class
candy 說 (下午 08:49):
yeah, run lola run
Vivi 說 (下午 08:50):
and I like your presentation
Vivi 說 (下午 08:50):
because it is so vividly
Roxy 說 (下午 08:50):
the clips made the prsentation vivid
Roxy 說 (下午 08:50):
haha
Vivi 說 (下午 08:51):
And my part has mention that some new idea in the article.
Roxy 說 (下午 08:52):
what kind of new idea?
Vivi 說 (下午 08:52):
Peter Pan complax
Vivi 說 (下午 08:52):
complex
candy 說 (下午 08:53):
oh yeah
candy 說 (下午 08:53):
i remember that
Roxy 說 (下午 08:53):
the mental issue
candy 說 (下午 08:53):
so which chapters in this book you are most interested in？

Wendy 加入對話。

Vivi 說 (下午 08:54):
I like the part I reported
candy 說 (下午 08:55):
why
Wendy 說 (下午 08:55):
really
Vivi 說 (下午 08:56):
because the article gives me a new aspect to thinking
Vivi 說 (下午 08:57):
the article says that we should be a dreamer climb up
Vivi 說 (下午 08:57):
instead of stuck on the ground
Vivi 說 (下午 08:58):
I like this example
Roxy 說 (下午 08:59):
yeah, it encourage us to look forward
Vivi 說 (下午 09:00):
I suggest you read P.323 in detail
Vivi 說 (下午 09:00):
you will got good idea
Vivi 說 (下午 09:00):
that's all
candy 說 (下午 09:00):
"get"
Vivi 說 (下午 09:01):
Sorry
candy 說 (下午 09:01):
ha
Vivi 說 (下午 09:01):
and which one want to share ?
candy 說 (下午 09:02):
me!
candy 說 (下午 09:02):
i like my part!
Vivi 說 (下午 09:02):
why
candy 說 (下午 09:02):
because this semester , i've watched lots and lots of movie
candy 說 (下午 09:03):
and in Jerome's class
Wendy 說 (下午 09:03):
so these are useful for this chapter
candy 說 (下午 09:03):
we can practice it !
Wendy 說 (下午 09:03):
your own experiences
candy 說 (下午 09:03):
yeah
Roxy 說 (下午 09:04):
what you presented can be related to what we learned in "understanding movies"
Vivi 說 (下午 09:04):
and do you have another reason
candy 說 (下午 09:04):
ummm
candy 說 (下午 09:04):
let me think
Vivi 說 (下午 09:04):
that's OK
Vivi 說 (下午 09:05):
anyone else?
Wendy 說 (下午 09:05):
wait
candy 說 (下午 09:05):
oh, i think the part which mention the steps of writing about movie are very useful
candy 說 (下午 09:05):
'
Wendy 說 (下午 09:06):
Candy, what do you want to say
candy 說 (下午 09:07):
!
candy 說 (下午 09:08):
nonono
candy 說 (下午 09:08):
you can just keep saying
Wendy 說 (下午 09:08):
ok
Wendy 說 (下午 09:08):
i think Roxy and I can talk about our part
Roxy 說 (下午 09:08):
yeah
Roxy 說 (下午 09:08):
My favorite chapter may be”writing in the world of work”
Roxy 說 (下午 09:09):
It provided four main writing forms: business letter, e-mail, memo and resume
Wendy 說 (下午 09:09):
that is what we present before
Roxy 說 (下午 09:09):
yep
Wendy 說 (下午 09:09):
maybe lots of people think that is boring
Wendy 說 (下午 09:09):
but it is useful
Vivi 說 (下午 09:10):
No I do not think it is boring
Wendy 說 (下午 09:10):
if you want to find a job or apply for graduat school
Roxy 說 (下午 09:10):
It 's a practical chapter to us
Wendy 說 (下午 09:10):
really
Wendy 說 (下午 09:10):
that is really good
Vivi 說 (下午 09:10):
I think it is useful if we want to work in a company
Roxy 說 (下午 09:12):
and all of us may probably have the chance to apply for graduate schools
Roxy 說 (下午 09:13):
once it comes, we can use these writing skills immediately
Vivi 說 (下午 09:14):
OK
Vivi 說 (下午 09:15):
and then we should talk about what the common merit in all article
Wendy 說 (下午 09:16):
common merit
Wendy 說 (下午 09:16):

candy 說 (下午 09:16):
i think maybe we can add some common points
Vivi 說 (下午 09:16):
yes
Vivi 說 (下午 09:16):
that is what I mean
candy 說 (下午 09:16):
ok
candy 說 (下午 09:16):
it's dine
candy 說 (下午 09:17):
fine*
candy 說 (下午 09:17):
first of all , we have to know who are the readers
Vivi 說 (下午 09:17):
I think the author tend to pick some good article to teenagers just like us !! Haha
Roxy 說 (下午 09:18):
because all of there aeticles are good examples to us
Roxy 說 (下午 09:18):
these
candy 說 (下午 09:19):
and then make outlines of it
candy 說 (下午 09:19):
to draft
candy 說 (下午 09:19):
brainstorming
Vivi 說 (下午 09:19):
I do not understamd what do you mean
candy 說 (下午 09:20):
i mean before you write an essay
Roxy 說 (下午 09:20):
discussing together↑
candy 說 (下午 09:20):
you have to organize it
Roxy 說 (下午 09:20):
yep
candy 說 (下午 09:21):
do you get it
Vivi 說 (下午 09:22):
no.... did we discuss what is kind of readers of article?
candy 說 (下午 09:24):
there are some misunderstanding ...
Vivi 說 (下午 09:25):
I agree
Vivi 說 (下午 09:25):
never mind
candy 說 (下午 09:25):
ok
Vivi 說 (下午 09:25):
keep what you are saying
candy 說 (下午 09:25):
ok
candy 說 (下午 09:26):
and the reason why we have to meke a draft is
candy 說 (下午 09:27):
make*
candy 說 (下午 09:27):
at first almost all of us will come up with different kind s of ideas
candy 說 (下午 09:27):
so we have to classify them
candy 說 (下午 09:28):
before we write
Roxy 說 (下午 09:28):
different ideas?you mean ous opinions toward the book?
Roxy 說 (下午 09:28):
our
candy 說 (下午 09:29):
no , i mean before we write
Roxy 說 (下午 09:29):
oops
Roxy 說 (下午 09:29):
sorry
candy 說 (下午 09:29):
the book is teaching us how to write , right？
Roxy 說 (下午 09:29):
that's right
Wendy 說 (下午 09:30):
so
candy 說 (下午 09:30):
so , we can put it in our book review
candy 說 (下午 09:30):
about the common feature of all the chapters
Vivi 說 (下午 09:31):
OH
Vivi 說 (下午 09:31):
!
candy 說 (下午 09:31):
？
Wendy 說 (下午 09:32):
now we know what you mean
candy 說 (下午 09:32):
ｇｏｏｄ　
Wendy 說 (下午 09:32):
clear explanation
Vivi 說 (下午 09:32):
I think there is some special methods the author provide us to learn
Vivi 說 (下午 09:33):
for example
Vivi 說 (下午 09:33):
in each chapter
Vivi 說 (下午 09:33):
there is a picture
Vivi 說 (下午 09:34):
and we should describe it using the methonds the chapter mention
Vivi 說 (下午 09:34):
do you agree?
candy 說 (下午 09:34):
yes!
Vivi 說 (下午 09:37):
And there are also some questions in each chapter to let us think what we have learned in each chapter repeatedly
Vivi 說 (下午 09:38):
I think maybe discussion also make us remember the methods deeply
Roxy 說 (下午 09:38):
yep. the questions which request you to pick out the mistakes and collect the errors.
Vivi 說 (下午 09:39):
How do you think Wendy
Vivi 說 (下午 09:39):
??
Wendy 說 (下午 09:40):
wait
Wendy 說 (下午 09:40):
let me think for awhile
Wendy 說 (下午 09:41):
the book tells us to find some wrong examples within the sentences it ofers
Wendy 說 (下午 09:41):
offers
Wendy 說 (下午 09:42):
and it is possible for us to make the same mistakes
Wendy 說 (下午 09:42):
so that can be useful, too
Vivi 說 (下午 09:43):
yes
Vivi 說 (下午 09:43):
I agree
Vivi 說 (下午 09:44):
and there is also some explaition beside the article in each chapter
Roxy 說 (下午 09:45):
right. there are particular comments of each form of business letter or memo.
Vivi 說 (下午 09:45):
you can know some main ideas if you can not realize by your own
Vivi 說 (下午 09:45):
?
Vivi 說 (下午 09:46):
what do you mean Roxy
Wendy 說 (下午 09:46):
you can ignore that
Wendy 說 (下午 09:46):
keep talking
Roxy 說 (下午 09:46):
sorry I type the wrong sentence
Roxy 說 (下午 09:47):
I mean there are explainations beside the examples
Roxy 說 (下午 09:47):
sorry
Vivi 說 (下午 09:47):
thats OK
candy 說 (下午 09:47):
you mean the blue word
candy 說 (下午 09:47):
？
Roxy 說 (下午 09:48):
yes!
Vivi 說 (下午 09:48):
yes
Roxy 說 (下午 09:49):
They give us clear ideas about the examples
Vivi 說 (下午 09:51):
and?
Vivi 說 (下午 09:51):
do anyone have another idea?
candy 說 (下午 09:52):
oh
candy 說 (下午 09:52):
don't forget that you have to revise the articles
candy 說 (下午 09:52):
again and again
candy 說 (下午 09:53):
i mean the writing skill
Vivi 說 (下午 09:53):
I do not know waht do you mean
Vivi 說 (下午 09:53):
oh I see
Vivi 說 (下午 09:54):
yes
Vivi 說 (下午 09:55):
what about Roxy and Wendy?
candy 說 (下午 09:56):
what writing skills you want to add？
Wendy 說 (下午 09:57):
find other useful knowledge and add that into the article while revising
Wendy 說 (下午 09:58):
therefore, the content can be more abundant
candy 說 (下午 09:59):
to support your points
Wendy 說 (下午 09:59):
kind of that
Roxy 說 (下午 09:59):
we can make connection between what we learned in the book and the real experiences
Vivi 說 (下午 10:01):
I think that the intrduction the author said to students and teachers are also useful
Vivi 說 (下午 10:01):
before we leran how to write
Vivi 說 (下午 10:02):
we should have right attitude
Vivi 說 (下午 10:02):
If we have wrong attitude, the article would not be persuasive.
Vivi 說 (下午 10:05):
that's all I want to say
candy 說 (下午 10:05):
yes
candy 說 (下午 10:08):
and ？
Vivi 說 (下午 10:10):
do Roxy and Wendy still here?
Wendy 說 (下午 10:10):
i am still here
Vivi 說 (下午 10:10):
can anyoneelse give different idea>
Wendy 說 (下午 10:11):
we have alread talked about the commen things of the book
Roxy 說 (下午 10:12):
and need to follow the guide line of each chapter
Wendy 說 (下午 10:12):
do we need to discuss about some specific points about its chapter's content
Wendy 說 (下午 10:12):
Roxy knows what i mean
Roxy 說 (下午 10:14):
ok we can talk about that
Roxy 說 (下午 10:14):
each chapter has its unique content
Vivi 說 (下午 10:15):
OK
Vivi 說 (下午 10:15):
go on
Vivi 說 (下午 10:16):
I have mentioned that the introduction
Vivi 說 (下午 10:16):
what about other charpters?
Roxy 說 (下午 10:17):
well, for example
Roxy 說 (下午 10:18):
But also a new way to appreciate an art work
Roxy 說 (下午 10:21):
combination of the art appreciation and composition is a totally different method about writing skill.
Roxy 說 (下午 10:22):
as to other chapters...let me think if there is a unique point of which I can give a example
candy 說 (下午 10:26):
ao
candy 說 (下午 10:26):
so
candy 說 (下午 10:27):
is that all we write in the book review
Vivi 說 (下午 10:29):
OK
Vivi 說 (下午 10:29):
thank you everyine
Vivi 說 (下午 10:29):
everyone
candy 說 (下午 10:29):
thank you!
candy 說 (下午 10:30):
see you tomorrow
Vivi 說 (下午 10:30):
Bye
Wendy 說 (下午 10:30):
buy buy